XD I completely forgot to describe Khaki..
rough pic http://djdragonwolf.deviantart.com/art /Khaki-Kurro-112593480
Khaki's trial.
"Wake up..." A voice said, faint and in the distance seemingly. "Wake up.." It said again. A small pause. An inhale. "Khaki wake up!!" He heard screamed into his ear. Khaki jumped up, startled, eyes wide slightly with a slight fear. He looked from side to side, landing his golden yellow eyes onto a green wolf, with lite blue hair on the top of his head, tips of his ears, his paws, the tip of his tail, his muzzle, and the insides of his feathered wings. "Not funny Tike!" Khaki growled, stepping foreword. Tike was younger than him. Tike laughed, "Aww c'mon Khaki! You've been asleep all day! Come out and smell the fresh air!" Tike challenged with a fanged smirk. "No thanks..." Khaki said, curling up again. He then felt a pressure around the back of his neck. He looked over his shoulder seeing a larger wolf, grey fur, lite blue muzzle, hair on her head, stomach, paws, and tips of her two tails. Her eyes had black iruses and yellow puples, switched out as a birth defect, though she could see perfectly fine. Her dark eyes held a sort of peace as she lifted Khaki up, setting him down next to Tike. "Heya big sis!" Tike said with a wave. "Hey Sara..." Khaki said a little grumpy. Sara laughed "Nice to see you too." She smiled, "C'mon it's a great day outside!" She said, walking out of the cave. Tike ran quickly behind her, Khaki, not so quickly.
A few hours later they were still walking, through a dark forest. "Where are we going sis?" Tike asked. "You'll see." She reassured. Khaki had his head down, ignoreing his surroundings, not enjoying this trip at the slightest. After about twenty minuets, the trio came about a lake, with a waterfall bringing the water in, and a river bringing the water out. Tike stared in Awe at the water system. Khaki continued looking down, ignoreing still. He wondered why a misfit like him was ever accepted into their pack. He suddenly felt a rush of cold, as tike pushed him into the water. "Waa!!" He said, then dunked under water. He paddled up and glared at Tike, who laughed. Tike jumped in himself and splashed Khaki. Khaki spashed back. Sara laughed a bit then lied down, watching the two pups play. Khaki dunked under water and swam, but he went to far, he was sucked into the current of the river going outward. He managed to get his head up and took a breath, he tried to scream for help, yet he was dragged under again. This continued, he was far away from Sara and Tike by the time he got out of the water. He shook his fur, stretched his wings, then let out a sad pup howl. The wrong thing to do.
Khaki heard a steady footfall in the distance, and a growl. He looked from side to side, shakeing. He then felt an impact of heavy paws on his side. Khaki screamed out a screech like yelp in surprise. The large wolf slashed the pup's side then snapped at his face, eating his eyes. Khaki screamed again, shakeing a lot. He thought this was his end, he was wimpering. The large wolf seemed to enjoy this. But then, Khaki managed to hear a small footfall in the distance, then a growl. He figured it was some of this wolf's packmates to come and finish him off. The footfall increased, and he wimpered some more. He could sence another presence by him. He shook more, then he heard a large yelp. And the pressure of the wolf's paws came off. The yelp became muffled, until he could only hear one breath. He heard footfall come closer, then stop at him. "d...d...don't....hurt...me..." He managed to say. The wolf laughed "Hurt you?" His voice sounded young. Khaki looked to the wolf.. pup as he had guessed, vaguely. "Th' name's Baruto, Baruto Rikute" He said. "Khaki... Kurro..." He managed. "That's some nasty wound.." Baruto said with a tilted head. "I'll fix ya up." Khaki tilted hid head, he felt cold on his side and his eye sokets, the bleeding seemed to seace and he felt a wrap around his side. "Hmm.." He said, then wrapped something around his eyes. "What's that?" Khaki asked. "A blind fold, it'll hide your eyes" Baruto responded. Khaki smiled then tried to stand up. Baruto put something over his neck. "That?"Khaki asked. "It'll help you sence others" He responded with a smile. Khaki nodded. "Where are you from?" He asked. "Nowhere.." Baruto said. "What? You have to come from somewhere? A pack?" Khaki asked. "I have no pack.." Baruto sighed. He then looked to khaki again "I'ma travler, I'll travel with you if you want?" He added. "Sure." Khaki said, thinking this wolf would help him back to his own pack that had adopted him in. "Well what are we watin' for? C'mon!" Baruto said running off. Khaki laughed and ran behind, fallowing the sound of his footsteps.
Haruken
It's a little bit better.
DJDragonwolf
Thanks.